I like this book and I think the author accomplished what he set out to do. But to actually DO any of this stuff I would need more information.
I started out in residential construction so when I build something I want plans and material specifications. I like the drawing of the pyrolysis machine on page 117. But I could never build one from that drawing and the author's description. I would need a to-scale mechanical drawing for each component and detail of the materials used in that component and a step by step description of how to assemble all the components (with some diagrams). Perhaps a master machinist with 40 years experience could build it just from the drawing presented BUT all the machinists with 40 years experience will be long dead when somebody tries to build one from this book. Please do not take this as a criticism of this book! But there needs to be one or more book repositories built around and to expand this book into the detail needed. With enough time and money and researchers to find the books needed or go to museums and create scale drawings of hundreds or thousands of machines and detailed processes and text books to teach the skills, you could eventually build a repository that had most of what would be needed to rebuild civilization.
The author briefly touches on the subject of mathematics and measurement (metric system). There are probably more than two dozen fields of mathematics that should be represented by books, plus workbooks. The same for the sciences. To say chemistry, physics, and biology is not even a good start. Then there is engineering in it's many fields. How do we even know that potential future user can even read the language all the books are written in and maybe more than one language. Must have books teaching language and reading, etc. What about tools, like a slide rule and logarithms.